I took a look at the Fabricator. I think they use full color tiles for the patterns. I usually don't. I put the colors in with Poser nodes. If you're pretty good with Photoshop, you could take my tiles and color them. Also, I sometimes use my weaves/bumps for more than just bump maps. The Fabricator says you can use your own pattern tiles, but it sounds like the weaves are then added to the pattern. I suppose you could ask Marieah if you can substitute your own weaves/bumps. Still, there's a lot of tricks I use in the Poser Material Room - I'm not sure Fabricator uses any equivalent in DS.
Still, one minor problem jumps out at me, probably because the lighting brings it out strongly. Something seems wrong about the shoulder joints. I'm always much aware of how the deltoid, pectoral and bicep muscles come together at the joint. Can't say exactly what's wrong or how to fix it, unfortunately. Am I making any sense?